“Home” by Natalie Goldberg
I am thinking of the rain in New York
the driving rain over the Metropolitan Museum
and the Guggenheim and the small delicatessen
down in the Village that sells flanken
I am thinking of the rain making rivers by the curb
near Ohrbach’s and Penn Station
the shop selling pita sandwiches
the grease and char of lamb
rotating slowly in the raining day
I am thinking of the fruit stands now
the five hundred fruit stands all over New York
I’m thinking mostly of the dark celery leaves
above the green stalks and the bright skins of oranges
I am thinking of Macy’s meat department
And the Nebraska cows
Of the hundred year old air in Macy’s
And the green cashmere sweaters on top of the glass counter
I am remembering the way pizza smells in the streets calling
hunger out of ourselves
I am thinking now of the Hudson River and the rain meeting it
The mist already rising over the George Washington Bridge
And the trees growing wildly on the other shore
Home memories: A photo from when I lived in my home in Port Macquarie.
A friend and I regularly go on Writer's Dates. We take our exercise books and usually head for the mountain. We do Natalie Goldberg's 10 minute writing exercise and then we read out our writing to each other.
Here are some of Natalie's prompts...
I remember....
I'm thinking of....
I'm looking at....
What is your first memory....
These are the rules we follow, we set a timer for 10 minutes and keep writing. We weave in the present moment sounds, smells, visuals.
I highly recommend her book Writing Down The Bones. I have it on audio book and listen to it regularly. It makes my day more mindful, and I seem to notice things that perhaps would go unseen at other times.
When I go back over this writing there's a lot of 'really' appearing. However the task of this writing exercise is not to change things as you write, keep writing. After you write and leave it for a while and come back to it, you'll see where you can learn and grow. Practice not perfection.